Ch 1? Critisism!! Help me!!?

well that was intersting. i can help with some things that should be imrproved. the husbands death i think was a little odd. This women is clearly an enmy, and yet neither the husband nore the protgegnist make any attempt to fight her. the husband seems to get a hug, and get stabbed. you should rethink that part. the part when she sees her through the peephole and says " It wasent. It was" confused me. At least put a question mark or change it so im not confused as to what is happening. in terms of making a catchy begining, you defintnly have made enough questions to spur your reader on.